I enjoy experimenting with syllabic count; this was birthed of just such experimentation...
I usually prefer not to rhyme (at least not so hideously) - I figure a good title for this would be 'Nine Reasons not to Rhyme'
...at any rate, it is too short and poorly written to be submitted as a Deviation, thus it will have to live here in my journal
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Lying eyes veil the crying inside
Feelings I thought had finally died
Unwelcome thoughts that I tried to hide
A seashell - washed by waves and the tide
Drowned by water in which I reside
Covered words - meanings merely implied
Spoken through naught wherein I confide
River reflection - backwards I'm eyed
Frozen - crystal-streaked cheeks that have dried
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...bit o' imagery hidden in there, still not redeeming, tho'
I figured out how to fix the 'abundance of new deviantMessages' problem - cancel the page mid-load and just mark 'em all as read - now I get to start anew - whee...
Still haven't come up with a better Deviant Icon - I'm trying, though...
I need to create some manner of ID as well - any suggestions?
The rest of my 'work' is slow in coming... it feels wrong for me to post poetry without an accompanying semi-relevant screenshot (however poorly done it may turn out to be)
I wish there were a search option for specific deviantART locations (say... Stock Art, perhaps) - that would make things much easier
Also, thanks to everybody leaving comments - they are MUCH appreciated!
Happy New-Year
~me





This is just a small thanks for watching and best wishes in the new year.
Have a great time.
Jelena
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Also have a fabulous New Year!
Cheers
Jelena
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To thank people for their support
and to wish them happy holidays,
I've decided to go to the pages of all 370 deviants
that are watching me, and wish you all a Merry Christmas,
Happy Hanukah or whatever it is you celebrate this time of year.
And may you all have a great New Year as well..
Make sure to make a list of new years resolutions,
and try to stick with them.
& Thank You for dev watching me,
and supporting me. You keep me going,
and help me be who I am.
Love, Kandice Michelle Plain
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my myspace!
` you can leave me on the corner where you found me,
i'm not for sale anymore.
Kandice
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my myspace!
` you can leave me on the corner where you found me,
i'm not for sale anymore.
have a nice day!!
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the difference between stumbling blocks and stepping stones... is how you use them!
FEATURED WORDS - TODAY'S FRONT PAGE NEWS
What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.
You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.
I offer only the truth, nothing more.
Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill
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The Angry Deviant
Random Deviant
Thank you so much again....
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attached --
~ecfc | ~industrialheaven
parted --
~deidre [my graphic side-account]
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the difference between stumbling blocks and stepping stones... is how you use them!
FEATURED WORDS - TODAY'S FRONT PAGE NEWS
Heh, I used to have hair the same colours as yours. Right, let's have a look around here...
Lindsay loves you all.
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